2 paragraph

HORrOutline

Examples1: setting: dark desert with mountains 

Examples2: from good, to extremely good , to understatement.

Paragraph number 1:

"Is it better to be feared or respected" Tone is used to show how you feel.

The speaker uses the same tone for the entire speach. The tone is very strong and specific. He uses his tone to make a better impression to himself. The part when he says:"That's how Dad did it.

That's how America does it. And it's worked out pretty well so far." His tone changes and goes back to normal. His tone is very effective, he always changes his tone, at the right place, at the right moment, making the speech perfect. When he said:"That's how Dad did it. That's how America does it. And it's worked out pretty well so far". His tone goes high, then even higher, then he went to understatement.

Paragraph number 2

" the crown jewel of Stark Industries' Freedom Line." This phrases does not really make sense. He puts the weapons as the best weapon of his industry. "It's the first missile system to incorporate our proprietary repulsor technology" this phrase does not make sense, he shows off his weapons by calling it "Jericho" the ancient leader of Israel. "I humbly present the crown jewel of Stark Industries' Freedom Line."

Notes Jericho

• Languages?

• Ideas?

• Story?

• Settings?

• Tone?

Keyword:

1. Juxtaposition
2. Jargon
3. Comparison
4. Similarities 
5. Repetition
6. Hyperbole 

Kahoot paragraph

K

Kahoot questions

Hook

   What is a hook

1. Topic Sentence 
2. Gets the readers attention
3. The Big IDEA!!
4. An explanation

Where would you write the hook when writing an outline?

1. The beginning 
2. The middle 
3. The end 
4. Not at all

When writing your paragraph, when do you write the hook?

1. After the thesis statement
2. At the beginning 
3. As the title
4. In the middle 

What is a good example for a hook?

1. A quote
2. A boring sentence 
3. A sentence  introducing the topic 
4. 
   

Intorduction

 

What is an introduction?

1. It explains the examples
2. its presents the topic
3. its starts the paragraph
4. It ends the Paragraph

Where does the intro go?

1. As the title 
2. After the Hook
3. After the thesis 
4. After the examples 

When Writing an outline when do you write the introduction?

1. First
2. Second
3. Third
4. Last

What is a good example of an intro?

1. Explains the topic
2. Restates the topic
3. Introduces the examples 
4. It ends the paragraph

Thesis

What is a thesis?

1. The Big idea!
2. The question
3. The 
4. The 

Where does the thesis go?

1. Just after the intro 
2. Just after the Examples 
3. The Finishing sentence 
4. The first sentence of your paragraph

When writing an outline when do you write the thesis?

1. First 
2. second
3. third 
4. Forth

What is a good example of a thesis statement?

1. Explaining the topic
2. Introducing the topic
3. Explaining the use of the topic
4. Restating the hook

Example:

What is an example?

1. The idea of the paragraph
2. Explaining the idea
3. An example of the topic 
4. The main idea!

Where does the example go?

1. Right after the thesis 
2. Just before the intro
3. At the very end
4. Just after the explanations

When writing an outline where do you put the examples?

1. Right after you have the thesis statement 
2. just before the intro 
3. You don't at all
4. Just after you have the topic

What is a good example of an example?

1. A quote with the topic in it
2. A Poem
3. A song
4. An sentence

Explanations

What is an explanation?

1. Something that explains the example 
2. Something that explains the explanations
3. Something that explains the thesis statement 
4. Something that explains the hook

Where does the explanation go?

1. Right after the example
2. Right after the hook
3. Right after the thesis 
4. After the conclusion

When writing an outline when do you write the explanations?

1. Just before everything
2. after you have written the thesis 
3. right after the introduction
4. just before the examples

What is a good explanation?

1. Something that explains the example 
2. Something that explains the thesis 
3. Something that explains the intro
4. Something that explains the conclusion

Conclusion:

What is a conclusion?

1. Something that restates the topic at the end
2. Wraps up your argument leaving the audience wanting more
3. An opinion
4. 'the end'

Where does the conclusion go? 

1. At the very end 
2. Before the example
3. After the thesis
4. before the thesis 

When writing an outline when do you write your conclusion?

1. Last after you have written everything
2. Before EVERYTHING!!
3. NEVER!!
4. After the examples

What is a good conclusion

1. Something that wraps up your argument 
2. Something that makes the audience want to read more 
3. Something that Tells your audience it the end of your paragraph
4. Something that gives you magical powers.

Kahoot questions

Metaphors kahoot questions

Which one is a good example of a metaphor from A Sound of Thunder? 

1. It closed its mouth in a death grin.
2. There was a sound like a gigantic bonfire burning all of time 
3. Roses sweeten the air.
4. Travis shifted his rife, clicked the safety catch and raised his weapon

What is a good example for a hook for a paragraph?

A quote
A metaphor
A Similes
A imagery

Metaphors of sound of thunder

 "It closed its mouth in a death grin." Metaphors is the transference of a 'quality' from one thing to another.The sound of thunder uses metaphors brilliantly to describe the story in more detail. Time was a film run backward."  The quality of film running backwards  is being transferred to time.It closed its mouth in a death grin. The quality of the  death grin is transferred to the t-Rex . Eckels felt his eyelids blink over his stare, and the sign burned in this momentary darkness. The quality of the that is being transferred is the visual quality of the brightness of the the fire ' burning the sign in his brain' The author uses metaphors to explain things in more detail without writing to much.

Does this safari guarantee I come back alive?

The sound of thunder uses a great deal of foreshadowing.

TIME SAFARI, Foreshadowing is giving a small hint of what will happen later.

The title, wich is A Sound of Thunder, is a hidden foreshadowing, because the same word comes at the end. Does this safari guarantee I come back alive?" We guarantee nothing. Meaning somthing is going to happen in the story. He is going to die.

INC.SAFARIS TO ANY YEAR IN THE PAST.

YOU NAME THE ANIMAL

.WE TAKE YOU THERE

.YOU SHOOT IT. 

Vocabulary of thunder

1. PLLEGM
   
   
   saliva mixed with discharges from the respiratory passages
   Warm phlegm gathered in Eckels' throat; he swallowed and pushed it down.
2. glorious
   having great beauty and splendor
   Yesterday, we had a glorious battle.
   all, everything fly back to seed, flee death, rush down to their beginnings, suns rise in western skies and set in glorious easts, moons eat themselves opposite to the custom, all and everything cupping one in another like Chinese boxes, rabbits into hats, all and everything returning to the fresh death
3. sway 
   pitching dangerously to one side
   The boat was swaying so badly
   Eckels swayed on the padded seat, his face pale, his jaw stiff.
4. envelop
   enclose or enfold completely with or as if with a covering.
   I enveleped myself into my coat
   The fog that had enveloped the Machine blew away and they were in an old time, a very old time indeed, three hunters and two Safari Heads with their blue metal guns across their knees.
5. franchise
   a business authorized to sell a company's goods or services
   Mcdonald is a franchise because it is owned by another enterprise.
   We have to pay big graft to keep our franchise.
6. finicky
   exacting especially about details
   A new computer is a finiky buisness.
   A Time Machine is finicky business.
7. annihilate
   kill in large numbers
   I annihilated all the mices of the house
   To destroy.
   With a stamp of your foot, you annihilate first one, then a dozen, then a thousand, a million, a billion possible mice!"
8. expendable
9. suitable to be used up
Expendable is somthing that can be used up 
10. The stuff i bought was expendable
    And the caveman, please note, is not just any expendable man, no!
11. slay
12. 
    
    kill intentionally and with premeditation
    I killed him intensionally, i slayed him.
    It is comparable to slaying some of Adam's grandchildren.
13. infinitesimal
14. I never saw somthing so infinitesimal
15. immeasurably small
16. Crushing certain plants could add up infinitesimally.
17. disproportion
18. The cake that i cuted was  cuted in disproportion
    
    imbalance among the parts of something
    A dead mouse here makes an insect imbalance there, a population disproportion later, a bad harvest further on, a depression, mass starvation, and finally, a change in social temperament in far-flung countries.
19. correlate
20. I finaly correlated the crime
    
    bring into a mutual, complementary, or reciprocal relation
    Then I correlate our arrival in the Past so that we meet the Monster not more than two minutes before he would have died anyway.
21. bisect
22. I bisected the little insect by accident
    
    cut in half or cut in two
    "Up ahead, We'll bisect his trail in sixty seconds.
23. resilient
24. Wolverine is resilient
    
    rebounding readily
    It came on great oiled, resilient, striding legs.
25. poised
26. I am ready to fight, i am poised
    
    marked by balance or equilibrium and readiness for action
    It ran with a gliding ballet step, far too poised and balanced for its ten tons.
27. remit
28. We will have to remit all your money
    
    send in payment
    We'll remit half your fee."
29. engulf
30. I am completely engulfed 
    
    flow over or cover completely
    A windstorm from the beast's mouth engulfed them in the stench of slime and old blood.
31. malfunction
32. This machine is malfunctioning 
    
    fail to work properly
    Within, you could hear the sighs and murmurs as the furthest chambers of it died, the organs malfunctioning, liquids running a final instant from pocket to sac to spleen, everything shutting off, closing up forever.
33. tonnage
34. a tax imposed on ships that enter the US
    Bones cracked; the tonnage of its own flesh, off balance, dead weight, snapped the delicate forearms, caught underneath.
    In this sentence, the tonnage is the flesh itself which is so heavy it's crushing.
35. stagnate
    exist in a changeless situation
    They gazed back at the ruined Monster, the stagnating mound, where already strange reptilian birds and golden insects were busy at the steaming armor.
36. primeval
37. God is primeval
    
    having existed from the beginning
    Eckels turned slowly to regard the primeval garbage dump, that hill of nightmares and terror.
38. subtle
39. People were subtle at the begining of the world
    
    working or spreading in a hidden and usually injurious way
    Eckels stood smelling of the air, and there was a thing to the air, a chemical taint so subtle, so slight, that only a faint cry of his subliminal senses warned him it was there.
40. subliminal
41. Felling that tell you somthing is watching you
    
    below the threshold of conscious perception
    Eckels stood smelling of the air, and there was a thing to the air, a chemical taint so subtle, so slight, that only a faint cry of his subliminal senses warned him it was there.
42. embedded
43. Inside somthing like mummys are embeded in there sarcophagus 
    
    enclosed firmly in a surrounding mass
    Embedded in the mud, glistening green and gold and black, was a butterfly, very beautiful and very dead.
44. scrabble
45. I was very scrabbled playing at scrabble
    
    feel searchingly
    He scrabbled at the golden butterfly with shaking fingers. "Can't we," he pleaded to the world, to himself, to the officials, to the Machine, "can't we take it back, can't we make it alive again? Can't we start over? Can't we-"

Comprehensive question

1: you disobey instructions, there`s a stiff penalty of another ten thousands dollars, plus possible government action, on your return.
2: They said they would want to go live in the year 1492, if Dutscher had become president over Keith
3: 2 shots in the eye (to blind them) and then go back to the brain
3: 60 million, 2 thousand, and 55 years
4: if off path, could change/destroy the future.
5: They were sterilized.
6:So they can't introduce their bacteria into an ancient atmosphere.
7:They don't live much longer because they are going to be killed by nature, like having a tree fall on them, or drowning in a tar pit.
8:He aims his rifle playfully.
9: he says that it can reach up and grab the moon
11: they have red marks
12: they barfed when the blood was spurting out of its throat 
13:get the bullet out of the T-Rex
14:it is spelled differently.
15:a dead butterfly

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Migrants in Calais

Daily express is  unsympathetic towards the migrant crisis and negative about the situation.
The paper uses words such a, swamped and other negative and sophisticated words that describe the migrant crisis.
The writer accuses of swamping an historical village. The daily express also thinks that it is very of them to dance in the night because they were suppose to be the heartrending image of traumatised refuges fleeing the horror of  their war-torn countries we might exept.
The Migrant crisis is a diaspora, or a victim diaspora
They might treat the migrants negatively because it will make a bad impression on them.
Swamping means submerged and drenched. The daily express does this because it and its audience are well educated, and care about the suffering of others. They are also from a place where immigration is understood and valued.

Negative or positive.

Example 1:http://www.express.co.uk/news/uk/610898/Human-Relief-Foundation-Calais-Migrant-Jungle-Kassim-Tokan

Negative 

1. Furious

2.burning food and cloth

3.migrants at Calais no longer need the help.

4.aid helpers stop

5. Stop giving food drinks and cloth

6.waiting migrant to go to England 

7.no more food 

8. No more help

9.they have all they need now stop giving

10.still waiting to go to england

Positive

1.has been giving aid to the migrant camp 

2.told him they were happy to stay in the camp.

3.They have enough food, they have enough clothes and we have seen clothes everywhere thrown.

4.enough food

5.water

6.safe

7.aid helper

8.enough cloth

9.education

10.go back to there country's 

Example 2:

Positive

1:Germany has seen almost 600,000 migrants arrive since the start of the yeae

2:Petr Medek said the soldiers are ready to join police forces on the border with Austria in two hours.

3:police said they were sharply increasing patrols on the Austrian border, with the number of officers rising from 220 to 720.

4:show more than 150,000 asylum seekers will arrive in the country this year.

5: Nearly 9,000 people have sought asylum in Sweden in the past seven days alone and the country is preparing for a crisis situation.

Negative

1:A GERMAN county facing an influx of migrants has declared an emergency for the first time since the end of World War II.

2:more than 1,000 refugees on Monday.

3:1945 that a disaster has been declared in the country.

4:putting 650 soldiers on alert to be ready to help police deal with a possible influx of migrants.

5:

Mass migration is a threat to our children’s education

NEARLY 38,000 migrant children started primary school in Britain this year and experts predict that 1,600 new schools could be needed within the next nine years to cope with the effects of unfettered immigration.

Thesis: the daily express is negative about the migrant crisis

Migrant crisis daily mail

when you write migrant in the daily express, politics comes up.

http://www.express.co.uk/news/politics/610085/Theresa-May-migrants-immigration-benefits

http://www.express.co.uk/news/politics/610147/ECJ-prisoners-votes-ban-EU-Britain-David-Cameron-migrant-benefits-legal

http://www.express.co.uk/news/world/610093/Tayyip-Erdogan-Turkey-President-European-Union-Refugees-Migrant-Crisis-Brussels

http://www.express.co.uk/news/uk/610165/EU-referendum-migrants-Europe-next-summer

http://www.express.co.uk/news/world/610225/Migrant-crisis-Mediterranean-named-the-world-s-DEADLIEST-crossing-for-refugees

http://www.express.co.uk/news/politics/610147/ECJ-prisoners-votes-ban-EU-Britain-David-Cameron-migrant-benefits-legal

http://www.express.co.uk/news/world/610357/Islamic-State-ISIS-jihadis-Europe-terror-attack-migrant-crisis-nerve-gas-Syria

http://www.express.co.uk/news/uk/610898/Human-Relief-Foundation-Calais-Migrant-Jungle-Kassim-Tokan

Furious charity pulls Calais camp funding after 'migrants BURN food and clothes'

Metaphors

 A metaphor is a figure of speech in which an expression is used to refer to something that it does not literally denote in order to suggest a similarity

               n

A simile is a figure of speech that expresses a resemblance between things of different kinds (usually formed with `like' or `as')

               An antonyms is

a word that expresses a meaning opposed to the meaning of another word, in which case the two words are antonyms of each othera word that expresses a meaning opposed to the meaning of another word, in which case the two words are antonyms of each other