samedi 2 avril 2016

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Hunger of blood" the big idea is:" war is unnatural" arms and the boy a poem of Wilfred Owen is a powerful poem that uses metaphor and imagery, it is about " soldiers don't have natural weapons." 
The main idea as I said is that war is unnatural. The metaphor " how cold steel is and keen with hunger of blood" makes it very unnatural. "Blue with all malice, like madmans flash" a similes, all connected to the description of the weapon. The second stanza talks about the bullet that they fire. He describes the bullet with teeth and a sharp grief
Attack-Ô Jesus make it stop! Attack by Siegfried Sassoon is a powerful poem about" going over the top", that uses imagery and metaphor to serve the main idea."Going over the top, Ô Jesus make it stop"The main idea of the poem is that the situation is hopeless and the men are desperate. With auditory and sight imagery, and metaphor, sight imagery is used the most in this poem. The sight imagery is best exemplified by" lines of grey... With fear"and "hope... Fist".the imagery is:" The barrage roars and lifts" . (In explanation, discuss what the examples do, including how they use metaphor as well.") 
The sentry-War is a brutal nightmare." The sentry is a poem that represents a explosion.
It shows and explain a explosion and he wrote his feeling about how he felt when he had to leave people behind." I see your light"  the poet used metaphor,alliteration, imagery,onomatopoeia, all to help him understand the big idea which is:" war is a brutal nightmare" the sentry is important in many reasons to make it important, he used alliteration, metaphor, imagery and so on. He used strong word such as, ghastly and horrific. He explains his feelings and what he sees using imigary of sight. In the sentry, the poet Wilfred Owen try's to make you understand the experience of getting bombed. 
On passing the new meni gate-Who fed the guns, the big idea of this poem is that people will just walk away and won't remember the names."On passing the new meni gate" a poem from.... This poem uses alliteration, listing,metaphor , rhymes,but no similes, all these to help the audience understand the big idea. The alliteration in the poem is " Paid, witha pile of peace-complacent stone" the listing is " doomed conscripted, unvictorious ones?" This sentence is also a rethorecal question. The words that are repeated were gate and dead.
The armies who endured that sullen swamp...
Rain-Rain midnight rain, nothing but wild rain" the writer is very specific one this type of rain.
"Nothing but wild rain" this word rain is repeated 2 times in one single phrase, making the word very attractive, like its standing out. "Rain, midnight rain" he even uses time, in his metaphor, when is this rain coming from? From the dead, from terror, from war. As a conclusion, this word rain is the most important word in the phrase, also because the title of this poem is "rain"."And neither hear the rain nor give it thanks" 4 lines after the first one. This sentence has the word rain used only once, and the sentence is in a poem type, making it hard to understand. But anyway, now in this sentence, rain can be heard, I think it mean, don't thank the rain, I will use the sentence after " for washing me cleaner than I have been" the man is dead silent, not moving, maybe injured, maybe already gone...


 

vendredi 11 mars 2016

"War is a brutal nightmare." The sentry is a poem that represents a explosion.
It shows and explain a explosion and he wrote his feeling about how he felt when he had to leave people behind." I see your light"  the poet used metaphor,alliteration, imagery,onomatopoeia, all to help him understand the big idea which is:" war is a brutal nightmare" the sentry is important in many reasons to make it important, he used alliteration, metaphor, imagery and so on. He used strong word such as, ghastly and horrific. He explains his feelings and what he sees using imigary of sight. In the sentry, the poet Wilfred Owen try's to make you understand the experience of getting bombed. 

Example

mercredi 24 février 2016

vendredi 22 janvier 2016

Peace

BY RUPERT BROOKE
Now, God be thanked who has matched us with his hour, B
      And caught our youth, and wakened us from sleeping!A
With hand made sure, clear eye, and sharpened power,B
      To turn, as swimmers into cleanness leaping,A
Glad from a world grown old and cold and weary;C
      Leave the sick hearts that honor could not move,D
And half-men, and their dirty songs and dreary,C
      And all the little emptiness of love!D
Oh! we, who have known shame, we have found release there,E
      Where there’s no ill, no grief, but sleep has mending,F
            Naught broken save this body, lost but breath;G
Nothing to shake the laughing heart’s long peace there,E
      But only agony, and that has ending;F
            And the worst friend and enemy is but Death.G

The poem is an italien sonnet:" love poem about war." 
Its a love poem to war entitled "peace" wich is the whole poem irony
Everything bad becomes good. The poem is about going to war brings you inner peace.

mardi 12 janvier 2016

Jargon

The tecnology or characteristic idiom of a special activity or group
Obsure and often pretentious marked by circumlocutions and long words

Inclusive and exclusive jargon.
Inclusive: sports
Gaming
Music
Exclusive: medicine
Law
Education


ˈdʒɑːɡ(ə)n/
noun
  1. special words or expressions used by a profession or group that are difficult for others to understand.
    "legal jargon"
    synonyms:specialized language, technical language, slangcantidiomargotpatterpatoisvernacularMore
    • archaic
      a form of language regarded as barbarous, debased, or hybrid.

Jargin

Mavashi gari
Natsuki

Forhand
Backhand
Smash
Volley
Net
T-line
Base-line
Serve
Ace
Duce
Doubles
Singles

mardi 5 janvier 2016

Monologs

http://transcripts.foreverdreaming.org/viewtopic.php?f=137&t=8588

Stiles: You know when you're drowning, you don't actually inhale until right before you black out. It's called voluntary apnea. It's like no matter how much you're freaking out, the instinct to not let any water in is so strong that you won't open your mouth until you feel like your head's exploding. But then when you finally do let it in, that's when it stops hurting. It's not scary anymore. It's - it's actually kind of peaceful

Repetition

Naming::: there is no naming in this monologue.
Sophisticated syntax
Simple syntax
Diction
Simple diction
Keywords
Jargon medical jargonl
Slang: freaking out
Simily:you feel like your head is exploding 

The big idea is :"drowning ."