Monologs

http://transcripts.foreverdreaming.org/viewtopic.php?f=137&t=8588

Stiles: You know when you're drowning, you don't actually inhale until right before you black out. It's called voluntary apnea. It's like no matter how much you're freaking out, the instinct to not let any water in is so strong that you won't open your mouth until you feel like your head's exploding. But then when you finally do let it in, that's when it stops hurting. It's not scary anymore. It's - it's actually kind of peaceful. 

Repetition
Naming::: there is no naming in this monologue.
Sophisticated syntax
Simple syntax
Diction
Simple diction
Keywords
Jargon medical jargonl
Slang: freaking out
Simily:you feel like your head is exploding 

The big idea is :"drowning ."

2 paragraph

HORrOutline

Examples1: setting: dark desert with mountains 

Examples2: from good, to extremely good , to understatement.

Paragraph number 1:

"Is it better to be feared or respected" Tone is used to show how you feel.

The speaker uses the same tone for the entire speach. The tone is very strong and specific. He uses his tone to make a better impression to himself. The part when he says:"That's how Dad did it.

That's how America does it. And it's worked out pretty well so far." His tone changes and goes back to normal. His tone is very effective, he always changes his tone, at the right place, at the right moment, making the speech perfect. When he said:"That's how Dad did it. That's how America does it. And it's worked out pretty well so far". His tone goes high, then even higher, then he went to understatement.

Paragraph number 2

" the crown jewel of Stark Industries' Freedom Line." This phrases does not really make sense. He puts the weapons as the best weapon of his industry. "It's the first missile system to incorporate our proprietary repulsor technology" this phrase does not make sense, he shows off his weapons by calling it "Jericho" the ancient leader of Israel. "I humbly present the crown jewel of Stark Industries' Freedom Line."

Notes Jericho

• Languages?

• Ideas?

• Story?

• Settings?

• Tone?

Keyword:

1. Juxtaposition
2. Jargon
3. Comparison
4. Similarities 
5. Repetition
6. Hyperbole 

Kahoot paragraph

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Kahoot questions

Hook

   What is a hook

1. Topic Sentence 
2. Gets the readers attention
3. The Big IDEA!!
4. An explanation

Where would you write the hook when writing an outline?

1. The beginning 
2. The middle 
3. The end 
4. Not at all

When writing your paragraph, when do you write the hook?

1. After the thesis statement
2. At the beginning 
3. As the title
4. In the middle 

What is a good example for a hook?

1. A quote
2. A boring sentence 
3. A sentence  introducing the topic 
4. 
   

Intorduction

 

What is an introduction?

1. It explains the examples
2. its presents the topic
3. its starts the paragraph
4. It ends the Paragraph

Where does the intro go?

1. As the title 
2. After the Hook
3. After the thesis 
4. After the examples 

When Writing an outline when do you write the introduction?

1. First
2. Second
3. Third
4. Last

What is a good example of an intro?

1. Explains the topic
2. Restates the topic
3. Introduces the examples 
4. It ends the paragraph

Thesis

What is a thesis?

1. The Big idea!
2. The question
3. The 
4. The 

Where does the thesis go?

1. Just after the intro 
2. Just after the Examples 
3. The Finishing sentence 
4. The first sentence of your paragraph

When writing an outline when do you write the thesis?

1. First 
2. second
3. third 
4. Forth

What is a good example of a thesis statement?

1. Explaining the topic
2. Introducing the topic
3. Explaining the use of the topic
4. Restating the hook

Example:

What is an example?

1. The idea of the paragraph
2. Explaining the idea
3. An example of the topic 
4. The main idea!

Where does the example go?

1. Right after the thesis 
2. Just before the intro
3. At the very end
4. Just after the explanations

When writing an outline where do you put the examples?

1. Right after you have the thesis statement 
2. just before the intro 
3. You don't at all
4. Just after you have the topic

What is a good example of an example?

1. A quote with the topic in it
2. A Poem
3. A song
4. An sentence

Explanations

What is an explanation?

1. Something that explains the example 
2. Something that explains the explanations
3. Something that explains the thesis statement 
4. Something that explains the hook

Where does the explanation go?

1. Right after the example
2. Right after the hook
3. Right after the thesis 
4. After the conclusion

When writing an outline when do you write the explanations?

1. Just before everything
2. after you have written the thesis 
3. right after the introduction
4. just before the examples

What is a good explanation?

1. Something that explains the example 
2. Something that explains the thesis 
3. Something that explains the intro
4. Something that explains the conclusion

Conclusion:

What is a conclusion?

1. Something that restates the topic at the end
2. Wraps up your argument leaving the audience wanting more
3. An opinion
4. 'the end'

Where does the conclusion go? 

1. At the very end 
2. Before the example
3. After the thesis
4. before the thesis 

When writing an outline when do you write your conclusion?

1. Last after you have written everything
2. Before EVERYTHING!!
3. NEVER!!
4. After the examples

What is a good conclusion

1. Something that wraps up your argument 
2. Something that makes the audience want to read more 
3. Something that Tells your audience it the end of your paragraph
4. Something that gives you magical powers.

Kahoot questions

Metaphors kahoot questions

Which one is a good example of a metaphor from A Sound of Thunder? 

1. It closed its mouth in a death grin.
2. There was a sound like a gigantic bonfire burning all of time 
3. Roses sweeten the air.
4. Travis shifted his rife, clicked the safety catch and raised his weapon

What is a good example for a hook for a paragraph?

A quote
A metaphor
A Similes
A imagery

Metaphors of sound of thunder

 "It closed its mouth in a death grin." Metaphors is the transference of a 'quality' from one thing to another.The sound of thunder uses metaphors brilliantly to describe the story in more detail. Time was a film run backward."  The quality of film running backwards  is being transferred to time.It closed its mouth in a death grin. The quality of the  death grin is transferred to the t-Rex . Eckels felt his eyelids blink over his stare, and the sign burned in this momentary darkness. The quality of the that is being transferred is the visual quality of the brightness of the the fire ' burning the sign in his brain' The author uses metaphors to explain things in more detail without writing to much.