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"War is a brutal nightmare." The sentry is a poem that represents a explosion.

It shows and explain a explosion and he wrote his feeling about how he felt when he had to leave people behind." I see your light"  the poet used metaphor,alliteration, imagery,onomatopoeia, all to help him understand the big idea which is:" war is a brutal nightmare" the sentry is important in many reasons to make it important, he used alliteration, metaphor, imagery and so on. He used strong word such as, ghastly and horrific. He explains his feelings and what he sees using imigary of sight. In the sentry, the poet Wilfred Owen try's to make you understand the experience of getting bombed. 

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Introduction:

Peace

BY RUPERT BROOKE

Now, God be thanked who has matched us with his hour, B

      And caught our youth, and wakened us from sleeping!A

With hand made sure, clear eye, and sharpened power,B

      To turn, as swimmers into cleanness leaping,A

Glad from a world grown old and cold and weary;C

      Leave the sick hearts that honor could not move,D

And half-men, and their dirty songs and dreary,C

      And all the little emptiness of love!D

Oh! we, who have known shame, we have found release there,E

      Where there’s no ill, no grief, but sleep has mending,F

            Naught broken save this body, lost but breath;G

Nothing to shake the laughing heart’s long peace there,E

      But only agony, and that has ending;F

            And the worst friend and enemy is but Death.G

The poem is an italien sonnet:" love poem about war." 
Its a love poem to war entitled "peace" wich is the whole poem irony
Everything bad becomes good. The poem is about going to war brings you inner peace.

Jargon

The tecnology or characteristic idiom of a special activity or group

Obsure and often pretentious marked by circumlocutions and long words

Inclusive and exclusive jargon.

Inclusive: sports

Gaming

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Exclusive: medicine

Law

Education

ˈdʒɑːɡ(ə)n/

noun

1. special words or expressions used by a profession or group that are difficult for others to understand.

   "legal jargon"

   synonyms:

   specialized language, technical language, slang, cant, idiom, argot, patter, patois, vernacular; More

   • archaic

     a form of language regarded as barbarous, debased, or hybrid.

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http://transcripts.foreverdreaming.org/viewtopic.php?f=137&t=8588

Stiles: You know when you're drowning, you don't actually inhale until right before you black out. It's called voluntary apnea. It's like no matter how much you're freaking out, the instinct to not let any water in is so strong that you won't open your mouth until you feel like your head's exploding. But then when you finally do let it in, that's when it stops hurting. It's not scary anymore. It's - it's actually kind of peaceful. 

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Naming::: there is no naming in this monologue.
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Jargon medical jargonl
Slang: freaking out
Simily:you feel like your head is exploding 

The big idea is :"drowning ."